A bruised heart within my bounds
Not love, but hurt is all it has found
Barely healing, taking so slow
Translucent colours of the rainbow
Collecting, expanding, becoming more
Cascading down to the ocean floor
Sinking through the acid water
It was then she wished that someone caught her
She wanted not attention hereby
Just some love before she died
A contest entry
- PIF by MysticalRayne.
575 points, ended May 23, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
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332 points, ended May 27, 2008, 21 entries
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525 points, ended June 12, 2008, 15 entries
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550 points, ended June 16, 2008, 92 entries
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Comments
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Really creative, liked it alot, thanks for the entery.
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Wonderfully done ~ best of luck in the contest
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sob
this sounds like me. i love my sister's boyfriend but all he can do is hurt me. i did something weird but it made me feel better
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