I waited for the day
When the darkness
Don't take over the sun,
I waited for the day
When life didn't have a struggle.
I waited for the day
When I wasn't the
Outcast of society...
I waited for the day
When I wasn't afraid of
Demons in my head...
I waited for the day
I could recover from this illness...
I waited for the day
When the night stop bringing ghosts
Into my house...
I waited for the day
When screams could be reduced
I waited for the day
Where those who are cruel
Could leave me alone
I waited...
I waited...
That day never came.
Author notes
Something i feel inside.
A contest entry
- Anything you want by MrCrepsley.
600 points, ended September 10, 2008, 195 entries
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The day does come, sometimes we have a habit of getting lost in the hurt of yesterday, and lose sight of whats in front of us. Awesome poem. I loved it.
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Very sad, and very deep. It feels like you can feel the emotion rolling off of this in waves. Yet it's a great poem. Keep writing. God Bless.
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This is awesome. I totally relate to this poem. The emotion is wonderful also. Great Job!
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I love the emotion in this piece. Yeah we all feel that way once in awhile and it really sucks. But we are all here for one another. you're never alone. my favorite part:
I waited for the day
When life didn't have a struggle.
I think why I like this part so much is because it describes your poem and your feeling in that one stanza. Excellent job. Thanks for entering and sharing this piece with me. Good luck -
The meaning in this poem is strong. Nice use of the last sentence because that shows that even though you've waited nothing ever changes.
Thanks for entering the contest
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