Their garish words reverberate in my brain
like lingo spewing out arrogant car speakers down Elm and Main
which violate chaste summer days driving by
crumbling sandcastles, stopping rainbows drizzling down a July sky
A little girl inside remembers what she heard
prefers sticks and stones to each insult covered in surgery words
the mirror found between the lines she still holds
not the fairest one, not even close, over and over she is told
I whisper a prayer and to the Heavens I look
and just as a smooth stone skips easily over gentlest brook
my desperate plea reverberates in my Fathers ears
translating the fluent language spoken by every one of my tears
He reminds me I am fearfully and wonderfully made
more precious than the lily of the field or spring’s soft green blade
knowing the number of hairs on my head but much more
having formed me Himself in my mother’s womb even before
He thought to about the sun, moon or the first star
in His image fashioned, a beauty sticks and stones could never mar
yet He made uncomely by whips, thorns and nails
then raised in love’s purest beauty, my King I will forever hail
A contest entry
- love... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended May 20, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You made a scenario of the sentiments of love bringing the life in your words..I love this piece..well done my friend....
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This is so beautiful, I really love everything about it. Great job. Shancy.


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Nicely written and you handled tge rhyme very well.I thought the ending was just a bit rough,but obver all I feel it to be a excellrnt write.





