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Achieve

Struggling through adversity
to escape the shackles
that bind thought and reason,
silken threads of confinement
conceal lights of liberty.

Wrestle chains of restriction;
discover true worth,
expand and fly
under emancipated tranquility.

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Prompt: "Just when a caterpillar thinks its life is over...it becomes a butterfly"
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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    May 21, 2008
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    Yes, yes, this is not obvious and yet the message surely is...just what I was looking for.


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    May 20, 2008
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    just when i think my life is over ,i fall in love xx good luck