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(re-do) The Gun

I've drowned in my tears
That fell to the ground
The gun firing in the distance
Is the only sound
My cries turned to echoes
As they faded from words
"Tell me the truth!"
I can't take this anymore.
You lied too me far too much.
Now there's harly anyone I can truly trust.
You've broken my heart
Like a fragile piece of glass
You promised me our love would always and forever last
I've cried again and wanted to die
You'r no longer in my thoughts every second that passes by
...I pulled the trigger...

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  • LoveDeprived
    May 19, 2008

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    I like this sweet ^^, the emotions that you have express is universal, almost eveybody has felt this way,, the ending was shocking but was nice for me, since i like death lol,,