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Gossamer (Why I Believe)

Spider's web--
Powerless
Against sword's edge;
Bears the spider's
Dragline, holds
Prey and offspring.

Faith's gossamer love
Can be felled by the sword
It opposes.

Yet, in a loveless world,
Who would oppose
The sword?

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    June 3, 2008

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    Quite a thought provoking piece you brought and made me to ponder..I love this work...thanks for sharing such a wonderful write....


  • Purush
    May 19, 2008
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    make it soon

    good ! make it soon
    before the last bell in the contest rings