swift swoop
over mountain rock
a river’s bed- cedes her gills
My Haiku Poetry
Author notes
modern Haiku
In a list
A contest entry
- EAGLE HIAKU by Swan song.
1000 points, ended May 31, 19 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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They are excellent fishers I watched to of them one day bring three fish back to their nesting eaglet in less then twenty minutes very good hiaku
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when eagles are involved in Haiku, it is simply nice to read, nice view of it over the mountain top swooping
for its beauty in the wind...good luck
Lin
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painting a great image in the reader's mind. great haiku and best wishes in the contest.
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A river's bed cedes her gills...as the eagle dives to feed upon the fish! Creative. You never cease to amaze me with your short version haiku's or poems. Simply lovely!!!! ~Sie
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I love eagles (perhaps that is one of the first poetic visuals my father showed me when i was still in high school (and my father's name Arnold means "strong as an eagle too). A lovely haiku, Mal - beautiful words in flight.
~ Nicolette
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As usualy, a wonderfully penned haiku sweet friend. I hope one day to be half as talented as you.
Kelli
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swift and powerful. Love the take. Well crafted modern haiku. My fav. Best of luck in the contest.
Sam
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