Here to bring joy to all
but you yourself have suffered a fall
Feeling dreary and down
Only able to wear a frown
Tears wipe your paint away
and wrinkes appear on your head
Happy thoughts have gone astray
Negative thoughts fill you with dread
Job is suffering
and money is low
Feeling as though
You will never smile again
Author notes
Picture prompt!
A contest entry
- Great Picture Prompt!!..(points updated)...The Sad Clown...This could be what they call a 'quickie' by lilmermaid.
800 points, ended May 25, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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three claps from me
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Thank you pet<3
im glad you liked it...xxx
it was a nice picture
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it was good
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Thank you...
lisa
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very good imagry
i can relate
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Thank you for your kind commenting.....
lisa
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sad..it captures the mood of the picture so well...i like the idea of a clown suffering in a job thats supposed to make others laugh
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Thats what i took from the picture
im gald you liked my take on it
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'yourself has suffered'
*have suffered*
this is class doll, really nice and a sweet take on the pic, nice one and good luck babe
domx
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Thanks for the correction! I wouldn't HAVE noticed it myself lol
glad you like it...
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no probs babe...
i wouldn't usually correct it but it a contest entry, everything should be kept in order...btw i wrote a com' on the abortion thingy...love love love coming your way doll!
lol
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Thanks babe, correct away, your usually right anyway.. except dates (lol)
Great-. ill check it out now
I love you
....xoxoxoxoxoxooxox
(big kiss and cuddle)
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