There is one thing of which I am so sure of
That nothing in this world will ever change it
That you will always be exquisitely lovable
That I can not exist without you
I am forgetful of everything but seeing you again
I see no further but only the angles of your beauty
I hear no more but only the peace in your voice
I feel no sensation but only in every moment with you
I have been astonished that men could die martyrs for religion
I have despised it, but despise no more, for I have discovered why
I could be a martyr for religion, love is my religion
I could die for that, I could die for you
My creed is love and you are its only doctrine
You have ravished me away from a power I can not resist
I have done myself many possible honors
That having you as my religion, my belief, my principle
But the highest of all is in giving you my heart.
Author notes
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well since you criticize on my first entry i re-entered to hopefully satisfy you, This has a piece of my heart in it, the inspired entry you were looking for has been granted, may you be delighted, for this was a pleasure to write. option 10 i think if their is a twist T_T.. and if i failed again ^^, DQ me! weee,, ^^, "smiles"
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oh my you dont know what to say?,, why not? anything is better than nothing ^^,
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AWW!!!
Alright, like you said, it is kickass!!! This is definitely sweet! very touching... heart-felt poem! It's very very very well written! Your lines were pure and genuine!
Raw emotions dwelled within every line!
Great job! And your last line was incredible! Such a lovely poem for a special someone!
Best of luck in the contest! seems you put all your heart and soul into writing this one! It'll pay off!
~Ranji
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