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[ Just another poem ]

Just another poem
to throw in with the others;
Just another day
to see the unwreched air

Just another blind heart
sleeping with hornets
Just another decision
that lost it way oh so long ago
Just another dollar
to put food on the table

Just another forgiving soul
she forgives as others won't
Just another dream
which couples with her visions
Just another time
when the laughter fades the distance
Just another second
that never ever stops
Just another word
Just another smile

Just another assumption
that usually isn't right
Just another sin
to throw into the fire
Just another pill
Just another drink
Just another loathe in drunkness
But she doesn't drink?

Just another stripper crying
losing her babies

Just another man
put in jail to provide for his family

Just another teenage pregnancy
ending in abortion
Just another pregnant woman
whose child is not her husbands

Just another hand
Just another story

Just another poem
to put on the table

Just another parentless baby
Just another abusive husband

Just another dream
Just another thought
Just another sceme

Just another fatal disease
Just another man dead on the street

Just another show
Just another heart

Just another poem
to throw in with the others;
Just another day
to see the unwreched air

Author notes

I am bored out of my mind I think I lost my muse somewhere just feel low. I don't really like this poem but you know what do I do.

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Comments

  • Well dear heart, this is just another comment that could help or hinder and just another moment in time where boredom and depression meet and shake hands. You are bored, I am depressed, lets laugh and make fun of life. I loved this! The reality of these words hit hard and home.


    Always ♥

    Renee

  • wow

  • joy4seen
    May 26, 2008

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    Boy that is the way life is anymore. Seems we never hear good news. So we just have to make are on. Hope you are feeling better.


  • GettingThroughDark
    May 25, 2008

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    Whoa this was really deep! I mean this has got to be one of the best poems you've written! Some of the parts really hit me at my heart. They are so true. Everyone sees them as a Just another... not a problem, like they should be! Great write!