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Pas De Deux

PAS DE DEUX

You’re my only prayer:
wrapped in surpassing praise,
adorned with desires.

I’m tired: your perfume,
pleasing as a ripe pressed peach,
enlivens and lifts.

Transatlantic songs
like up-close dirty dancing:
electrotherapy.

She whispers, "Last time ..."
Alas
last times linger,
never last

Author notes

An anatomy of a love affair, exemplified by the Last Dance on the occasion of her birthday [31st. May]

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  • chills gold member
    May 19, 2008
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    last times linger - never last. I'll have that on my headstone please. x


  • ladame
    May 19, 2008

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    I adore this! You use rhythm, form and connotation to express the ideas brilliantly.

    This is like some of my poetry...hmm...*inspired*

    One thing: author notes, you might want to re-read the description. Thanks for entering.