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Smile

Smile
Why does the sun rise
Each and everyday
Perhaps like your smile
That warms my heart
And brightens my day


Whether together
Or far apart
So smile for me
And for all to see
Each and everyday
For everyone and me


For it will warm
The coldest of heart
And brighten
The darkest
The darkest
Of day

 


  © 2008

Author notes

By ~ Maxboy
Background By ~ Little Feather

Written for and dedicated to my wife doolie.



Bronze,HM(2),

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A contest entry

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  • doolie gold member
    January 29

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    Thank you Love for the beautiful poem that you have dedicated to me. It touch my heart to it's very core. I'm smiling brightly for you right now.
    I love you sweatheart


    • Maxboy gold member
      January 30

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      Thank you so much sweetie, your smile is so important to me.

      Love You


  • kira1115
    September 4, 2008

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    This poem shows the other side to what my poem reads, very interesting take on it. Nice to see a happy poem lurking amidst all of the gloom.


    • Maxboy gold member
      September 4, 2008
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      !! WOW !!

      Thank you so very much for the Bronze, I am very happy you enjoyed my poem.

      I am pleased that I could maybe bring a smile to you, one that I feel could use it. Now, here are some hugs to go with it.

      Thank You
      Don


    • Maxboy gold member
      September 4, 2008
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      Thank you for your wonderful comment.
      I hope it did its job and brought you a smile.

      Don


  • owlish
    August 24, 2008

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    Very sweet and gentle. Beautiful. Nice description of a smile. Thank you for your entry, best wishes!


    • Maxboy gold member
      August 28, 2008
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      Thank you so much for the Honorable Mention. It really does mean so much to me, I can't thank you enough.

      Thanks Again
      Don

    • Maxboy gold member
      August 24, 2008
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      Thank you very much for the applause and wonderful comment.

      Thanks
      Don


  • SweetNessaLynn
    July 8, 2008
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    Jasmine thinks this one is nice.


    • Maxboy gold member
      July 8, 2008
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      I'm happy to hear Jasmine likes my poem for her. Please tell her thanks for me.
      Thank You


  • SweetNessaLynn
    July 6, 2008
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    This is such a beautiful piece of poetry. I love how it flows. Thank you for entering.

    • Maxboy gold member
      July 6, 2008
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      Thank You. You are very welcome. I hope Jasmine enjoys her book of poetry.


  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    June 28, 2008

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    This is an awesome poem. I like the way you describe a smile. It made me smile reading it. Thank you for entering my contest.


  • A-Daisy-Among-Roses
    June 21, 2008

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    I like It

    Very nice, cheerful and sweet. You have some spelling issues but those are a quick fix. I will be reading all the entries again before finalizing so feel free to edit your work.


  • Hope Angel silver member
    June 17, 2008
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    This is beautiful.So sweet too. Thanks for entering.


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 17, 2008
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      Thank you so very much for the Honorable Mention. It meens a great deal to me. I am happy that I could help brighten a day for xsaphicxbutterflyx.


  • borrowing.moonlight gold member
    June 10, 2008

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    thats really beautiful.. i love your words. but before the actual poem loaded and i saw the background i was just like "eeeehhh" lol [but thats just because im a dark person i really like how you paired it with the poem good job] so really i love your words here. the message is clear and i love your emotion, again i love that you credit your wife sounds like she deserves it thanks again for entering and good luck again!


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 10, 2008
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      dawn.of.juliet

      Thank you again. Yes she does deserve the credit and more. I cannot relate to the dark side, as I love to joke, poke fun and make lite of life. Thank you for the honest comment, it is the only way I will learn.
      Thanks
      MAXBOY


  • 2lullabyhaven
    May 30, 2008
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    Smile is my personal trademark hahaha thanks for honoring it in this poem lol


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 31, 2008
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      2lullabyhaven

      Thank you so much. There just cannot be to many smiles or to much laughter. It is a virus everyone needs to catch. You have a very nice trademark. lol and you have a very nice day.
      MAXBOY


  • Kelli Marie
    May 22, 2008

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    A lovely write. Full of emotion and love for a special person in your life. Beautifully crafted. Good luck in the contest.
    Kelli


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 22, 2008
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      Kelli Marie

      Thank you for the encouragement and applause.
      It means a lot to someone just starting out.

      MAXBOY


  • DawnKestrel
    May 21, 2008

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    Nice.
    Good luck in my contest!


  • only1love4ever
    May 21, 2008

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    Only1love4ever-Reply

    Wow this is very honoring to have in my contest. It definently shows the love you have for your wife. It is one to be shared with so many. A smile can bring so much joy even tho it is the easiest thing to do, really.

    Thank you so much for this opportunity.
    Also thank you for participating and giving your all.
    It is much appreciated.
    Have a wonderful day.
    God Bless.
    Good luck.
    ~Only1love4ever

    • Maxboy gold member
      May 21, 2008
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      Poetryintheblood

      Thank you for your nice comment.
      MAXBOY

    • Maxboy gold member
      May 21, 2008
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      only1love4ever

      Thank you again for all your kind words of encouragement.
      MAXBOY

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    May 21, 2008
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    Thank you for your sweet entry, good luck in our contest, Josie & Kiarna


  • RatherImaginative silver member
    May 21, 2008

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    This is a sweet poem! She must have been very touched to have something like this written for her. One thing I would suggest would be to add some punctuation to soften the flow a bit, just enought to match its tone, but that's just my opinion.


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 21, 2008
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      RatherImaginative

      Thank you for helping with pointers. I do want the help when I can get it. I do not have the soft touch yet. I will have to work on that. To be honest, I never even thought of using punctuation. Thank you so much.

  • Maxboy gold member
    May 20, 2008
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    Thank you for the comment.


  • my.stars.dont.shine
    May 20, 2008
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    this is sweet! thanks for entering and good luck!

    • Maxboy gold member
      May 20, 2008
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      xsaphicxbutterflyx

      Thank you for the comment.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    May 19, 2008

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    Maxboy

    Very well Done Dear This is a sweet write. Thanks for sharing with us here at allpoetry. Gonna read some more. hehe


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 19, 2008
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      RedwingSpirit

      Smile
      I am sorry, I don't have the reply down yet. Thank you for all your help, aplause and positive comments. I will comment soon. You read "TYPIST", that is my real life story. lol I will try this again.


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 19, 2008
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      RedwingSpirit

      Smile
      Thank you for all the positive, applause and help. I will comment on yours as well, it will take me a little time. You read "TYPIST", that is my true life story.
      Thanks Again

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