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Fries

New recipe, they said
added iron they said
low fat, low sugar.

Too good to be true!

They taste the same
but are harder to bite into

Isn't all fast food
just another nail
in your coffin?

Author notes

20-45 words from the picture prompt.
Picture credit
http://miss-maja.deviantart.com/art/nail-fries-86088257

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  • judyjudyjudy
    May 20

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    What, no rhymes? But it's very well done. Those nails can be damn tasty! I am drawn to them, even the McDonald's ones, and would take them over alfalfa sprouts, which have never nailed a coffin down as far as I know.

    Congrats on the HM


  • moonbumps silver member
    May 20

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    Too true-YUK!!!
    Congrats on the well deserved HM-
    I did look at this and could not find my muse- but now I see this and think-OF COURSE!!!!!
    xxx


  • Merry Christmas
    May 19

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    I can only hope that they never add that new recipe, it would hurt too much. I enjoyed this, it's very funny and humorous

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 19

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    Yes very true indeed! I think that is what this picture is projecting.. a very literal take on it, yet done with great truth!


  • Nature Song silver member
    May 19

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    Lol, love the pic. What a great way to add to our fast food diet. Sometimes I have often wondered if that isn't what they will be serving soon. ~Sie


  • LovelyLuminousLilly
    May 19
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    Hah that's funny wish it was longer lol


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    May 19
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    I'm lovin' it!


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    May 19
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    very good...just another nail in your coffin. good luc in the contest!


  • markgrif gold member
    May 19
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    True, true

    Pen on.

  • happy angel589
    May 19
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    i have nothing to say except ROCK ON DUDE!!!!!!!!!!! lol
  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    May 19

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    This is great I like wehre you took the prompt the serious side of it thanks for sharing goodlukcin the contest

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