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Sick

Giving birth to a beautiful child
to savagely tear their clothing
Sweetest voice and nature mild
you wrecked with your groaning

Your flesh and blood you created
only to shake a fist in their face
their little face once looked on you elated
But now they look on you with disgrace

This little child all alone
grew up with hate for you
Your actions we will not condone
These childrens word we will construe

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I couldn't go on writing, i wanted to write something to support this but alas i am weak for children and i have seen the aftermath of a beautiful woman who this has happened to :

http://allpoetry.com/poem/3677582

so, yeah its a very emotional topic for me...

good luck and i really appreciate what you are doing...xxx

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    June 18, 2008

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    This was a great piece.
    Thanks so much for your entry.
    Wishing you the best in the contest.


    well said I know, sometimes it gets hard for me to write as well. Keep it going.

    Passions


  • infernalxfidelity
    May 19, 2008
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    this is beautiful and sad, but feels unfinished. i like it though. good luck in the contest.


    • Li snuffles
      May 19, 2008
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      Thank you, I have not entered in the hope to come somewhere in the conteest but merely to show my support for a topic i feel strongly about...xxxx

      lisa