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Haiku 129

hovering eagle's
perfect eyesight discerns prey
down at ground level

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  • Swan song gold member
    May 23
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    Very true


  • Piccola gold member
    May 20

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    it seems we like to focus on the eagle's keen eyesight
    and his prey. Not even knowing he has been sighted in most cases. great haiku and best wishes in the contest.