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Those Eyes

Innocent blue eyes
Piercing into my very being.
She looks as if she is so fragile;
A single kiss would shatter her.
At the same time there is this strength
That emits from her into me.

Every time our eyes meet,
Even if it's for only a second,
I have this overwhelming feeling,
That burns in my chest,
To protect her from this harsh world.

Her porcelain face is that
Of a guardian angel.
Her smile tells a story of hardships
But her eyes tell a different story;
One of an innocent little girl.

One day I might have the courage
To softly whisper a single word to her.
One day I might have the courage,
To hold her gaze for just a second longer.

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•Alodia aka blackmage9
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  • Kuranya gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    Hoodwink

    I love the innocence of this piece, the fact that all of us, not just younger people, should kiss goodbye fear and take love by the hand without waiting a moment longer. Beautiful. Best to you fine poet


  • WarmHeartedGeisha
    May 19, 2008

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    Neither me or Alodia would, or could see this as offensive. Its wonderful!! In fact, I'm going 2 send this 2 her so she can read it. Thank u 4 entering!!

    ~Lorissa~


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    Very enjoyable reading!!!!!   I love the way your words describe the beauty of the girl!!!!! Best wishes in the contest!!!!!!!!!


  • Lexie
    May 19, 2008

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    You make the little girl sound so beautiful. Reminds me of my little cousin. Good poem.