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A strange land and a strange body

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Moonlight and coldness interrupts my sleep,
my eyes open to many different moons,
mouth is dry and hungry. Mind is somewhat fuzzy.

Blue moonbeams calm my soul, I stand and listen,
the night air is still, I am the God here, I can feel it.
I embrace the soft cold earth and move to the rhythm of the night,
Luna madness calls me,        throwing my head back I call out!
In the distance a reply resounds, an echo laughing at me.
I am alone and in a strange land, in a strange body,
I smile, realizing that I always have been, I move away into the night.  

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But when you wake up,
this is where you find yourself.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    May 24, 2008

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    Yes, that is how one could feel themselves,
    in this new land.. I have felt at times that
    I have lived my life in a land that does not
    exist.. only to want to find a place like this.

    Riftkin


  • Lady Australis silver member
    May 19, 2008
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    i love you daddy