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The Frog Prince (My version)

He was a frog who thought he should be King,
had met a fair maiden, was smitten in fact.
lost his composure, didn't know how to act,
a different result circumstances did bring.

Tripped over a witch, cursed him on the spot,
into a big frog he was turned in a blink.
Suddenly, yonder pond is where he'd drink,
what a dilemma you find yourself in Scott

Now the Princess, the lovely, sweet Tory,
pines away for her handsome missing prince.
Vanishing without any concrete evidence,
the huntress is searching for her quarry.

Now the Prince, he just has to make do,
treating the pond like it was his own.
Yet the abiding sensation of loss only grew,
the outcast feeling of being all alone.

Searching high and low for her missing beau,
sending inquires by courier, hither and yon.
Till exertion sets her skin all aglow,
flexing her birth given princess brawn.

Poor Scott is eating flies at the pond,
some might say it's what he deserved.
This green warty skin having been donned,
yet the hardships of the townsfolk were observed.

Princess Tory, disguised, canvasses the town,
coming into contact with the worst that there is.
Beginning to fear for her long vanished Griz,
she begins to wear a perpetual frown.

Human memories start to fade with time,
being a frog's not too bad of a life.
No decisions to make, no real strife,
no making judgments on another's crime.

Tory finally meets up with the wicked witch,
she lives in a very unsavory neighborhood.
Laying down the law, she's not misunderstood,
the old crone confesses, "he has been bewitched".

Must kiss the Frog Prince once on the warty nose,
will gain back his memories, all of his clothes.
She has to find her long missing love somehow,
but does not know which frog her Prince is now.

Kissing every frog she can lay her lips on,
hoping every time it will be her Don Juan.
A sudden poof, a feeling of disquieting disorientation,
a sodden prince knelt at her feet, gazing with adoration.

Led dazed to her carriage, following meekly along,
beating human heart once again breaking into song.
She owns the poor boy now, will become his wedded wife,
wont be long till he wishes, he had back a Frog's life.
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Author notes

Gr is wo ld
I chose this subject because I made the Background and it needed a poem to go with it.
Yes it's supposed to rhyme.

Rhyming quatrains with differing rhyme schemes.

The moral of this story is:
Go ahead and kiss a bunch of Toads,
but you wont find your Prince, Tory got 'em already. ~grin~

I'm kidding honey, really, seriously, I'm just making fun. I love you, adore you, can't live without you. Just don't yell at me K? ~ROFL~

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  • ZachP gold member
    October 29

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    Oh, what a chuckle!
    Cute, brilliant, and witty.
    And so loving.

    You are a wonderful storyteller.

    Thank you for sharing this,
    I wish you all the best.

    Congratulations on your well-deserved laurels!


    Zach Estel.


  • Denerica
    October 15

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    LOL...how did I know that you would add that pun at the end that with all the desire, all the longing, would be the typical man joking or not about wishing he stayed a frog. LOL Clever, Just loved it. Wonderful story telling. Excellent. Blessings.

  • Juno101
    September 22

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    Once I read that he was enjoying the life of a frog I knew what the joke would be, but it was still enjoyable.

  • I loved this! OMG! I could not stop laughing throughout the entire piece. such great emotions and hilarious imagery. BRAVO! WELL DONE! WOW! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!


  • XxNinjaNemoxX
    August 8

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    Oh my God! I love that
    The ending made me giggle.
    The whole thing was a work of art! I love it
    Thanks for entering and best of luck
    xoxo.


  • JinSays gold member
    July 16

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    Love it, a very enjoyable read.
    Thank you Scott.
    Love,
    jin

  • This was funny! I loved it! I loved the ending. WOW! This was fantastic! I couldnt' stop laughing! WOW! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!


  • Frogzter gold member
    July 13

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    I love it! It is solid gold to me! Love the background as well, but that was quite the story my friend. Thanks for passing it along!

  • Sits on the dock...and wonders... I cant believe in 2008 you put my name on a frog piece. where the hell was I?
    Either or...why yell, You do as you please anyway,
    as long as no one got hurt in the process. its all good..i guess....

    Lovely work
    good luck im sure j i n will enjoy this one

    Love
    Passions

  • Cute good lick and good jo


  • penman gold member
    April 15
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    Congrats on adding a silver to your growing collection for this fabulous write

  • This is great!!


  • penman gold member
    April 10
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    Wonderful

    Oh my what a great write to enter for the quote. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

  • I like it, just not a winner.


  • just4fun20
    March 10
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    this is a great poem i love the back groung its so cute and so is the poem you did a great job


  • Meroza
    September 15, 2008

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    This one's so cute, a perfect bed time story.
    And best of all, this dosen't sound like a re-done copy of another fairytale at all. There isn't many who are able to write a fairytale with out copying others work

    Thanks for sharing.


  • Hello...No.One.Home silver member
    August 31, 2008

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    I still can't stop laughing which is a bad thing as I'm in class at the moment.

    I love it and I new twist on the frog prince theme.

    I wish you well in this contest, Rose


  • lostangel07
    August 8, 2008

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    hahaha love it! It is true isn't it...Lukily I think I found my Prince Thanks for this uplifting write!


  • Intricate Wordsmith
    June 11, 2008
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    If you are going to enter my contest I would appreciate it if you would follow the rules. You are lacking in your Author's Notes:
    ~Any further explanation as to why you choose that subject (not required, but it helps)
    ~Tell if it is supposed to rhyme or not

  • OurxBeginning
    June 6, 2008

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    What an adorable background!! This is a little long for my taste to be honest, but I did enjoy this. Nice rhyming, not forced at all. I also liked your moral, made me giggle. Thanks for entering and good luck.


  • ixtli
    May 30, 2008
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    Oh, I forgot to say, thanks for entering my contest and good luck!

  • ixtli
    May 30, 2008

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    This is a great twist on the familiar fairy tale. I found it funny. This captures a kind of humor that I think many appreciate. I like the last three stanzas the best.


  • Nature Song silver member
    May 23, 2008

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    I do believe sitting on your lilly pad might be better than trying to find love at times! Very interesting twist...Nicely done ~Sie

  • JWGoethe
    May 21, 2008
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    clever and fun to read. Nice job.


  • Casparia
    May 21, 2008

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    I think Tory will find it appealing. This was an interesting tale to tell. Wonderful background by the way. Keep spinning your tales!

    Cari


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    May 21, 2008

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    A frogs life i bet can be fun, leaping all over town, hoping to find his princess as she seeks out her prince...yuck would hate to be the kisser of frauds lol, very funny poem for tory, thanks for sharing Scott...
    Lin


  • I will stand by you
    May 21, 2008
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    a great write. But I agree with the fact that Tory got them all

  • Eusebius
    May 21, 2008

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    bravo

    Oh, this IS funny, funny, funny stuff here! A laugh a stanza... loved it... bravo... bravo... bravo...


  • Cannonsfire
    May 21, 2008
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    Oh this was so much fun to read lol...I enjoy a fractured fairytale once in a while Love, C


  • Maedes
    May 21, 2008

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    hehehe... like this part:
    "being a frog's not too bad of a life.
    No decisions to make, no real strife,
    no making judgments on another's crime..."

    and also your 'kidding notes'
    thanks for sharing this bedstory


  • cheaphotelsign
    May 19, 2008

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    very cute...a fun flow..a hopping read, seriously...you've actually conveyed a feeling of hopping for this reader. well done. a light write, lovely and sweet.

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