Here descends Brahma,
"Lord of the universe".
With every footsteps,
on the shores of sullen seas
He foresees the Shadows besieging him.
But he Still tries to stroll,
in the dunes of sand
and reaches the terrains
where the mortals reign.
But suddenly he realizes,
the curse of Lotus
Still desolates him.
And He cedes the earth
and flees away to Eden
along with his rueful plaint
Author notes
Read it and please give a sincere comment on it
A contest entry
- The Truth About War by BlackSwan.
550 points, ended May 28, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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a bit philosophical...but interesting to read
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This poem really creates many images in my mind. Certain icons such as the "dunes of sand", "the curse of lotus", "flees away to Eden." Truly engaging perception, as Brahman crosses this land. I was not expecting a poem from this perspective, interesting. I like its originality.
-Thank you for your entry, Angi Terese
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