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Teaching With Our Talons




empty handed

the sniper of the forest

defends peace

A contest entry

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  • Swan song gold member
    May 31

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    I want to comment on this again because it is much deeper and a different approach then the other haiku
    This is a patriotic and military poem it is proud and vigilant Well done poet!

  • Swan song gold member
    May 23
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    Interesting to say the least this is a haiku to ponder


  • Piccola gold member
    May 20
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    Nice haiku; not what I was expecting. best wishes in the contest.
  • ocerus
    May 19
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    Could this be, oh, I don't know; a bald eagle? Good job. - ocerus