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Teaching With Our Talons




empty handed

the sniper of the forest

defends peace

A contest entry

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  • Swan song gold member
    May 31, 2008

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    I want to comment on this again because it is much deeper and a different approach then the other haiku
    This is a patriotic and military poem it is proud and vigilant Well done poet!


  • Swan song gold member
    May 23, 2008
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    Interesting to say the least this is a haiku to ponder

  • piccola silver member
    May 20, 2008
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    Nice haiku; not what I was expecting. best wishes in the contest.

  • ocerus
    May 19, 2008
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    Could this be, oh, I don't know; a bald eagle? Good job. - ocerus