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From Deutschland to Bighton then Cairo - Jackille(ju)d(y)

Jack turned his hunched back from Brighton with depression and aim and tension and pain and a mission

The train ticket got and besiege plot.
The blow. The kill. Maybe the go

In a beige costume a puppet sits as a pet at custom while flying its can of hope to Cairo
or was it his can of worms in a book of 'how to kill a Deutsch pretending to be an Egyptian?

His charades of forbidden trespasses took on by scandalous lies that distort like storm.
he thought 'Where is Judy. Big eyes. Orange perm?'

In no formality, taking no one as a prisoner
the pup' will charm, perform chinese burns on arms and maybe book a room out to kill a deutsch
because in Cairo there's someone he hates very much

One called Judy; his ex perfomance partner who once sat with him on their owners window sill

He remembered her eyes shining like street lamps but then they started to dim
She went through a black out and disappeared in between one of their acts
Discretion could of been said she'd had took like a blind charade she played

Both had their charades and now he'd want some answers. Some revenge.
Some kill. The go. The whole blow.
Yet deep down beneath his green skin he knows his chances of finding Judy were thin.

Author notes

Cairo.
Book. Train Ticket. Puppet. Window Sill. Street Lamp.
Besiege. Distory. Charade Discretion. Chances. maybe

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  • Elfin
    May 19, 2008
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    Typo on last line!!


    • LeanneBridgewater
      May 19, 2008
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      oooh no

      thanks
      I read through and must of missed the last line
      phew.. good job you said!
      I hope you're well!! xxxx