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From an Old Paper Napkin

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bubble
in air,
and a thorn
near the rose.

i don't know
- in your love -
when i would burst.


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2 am
20.04.2008

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  • fathom me
    June 9, 2008

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    A bubble bursting by a rose thorn... My saying sad, true.. something that jars our dreamed life... all will seem less.. This itself is eloquent- the idea.. Its beautiful! Though I had to read the first 4 lines twice to get it..


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    Ah...what else one can describe when the story is at the end ..and when the love is at the edges..truly an touching immagery is here..well done...
  • Mailservhr
    May 19, 2008
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    Good Piece

    as w/everything at AP; so good I am at a loss.