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no marks

float
leaves trail
invisible

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haiku

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  • Swan song gold member
    May 23
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    This is a short short haiku Very interesting indeed

  • crimsondew silver member
    May 23
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    Beautiful senryu...
    all the best!


  • Sandal
    May 21

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    This one is a little too bare for my taste, I am not seeing the image clearly. Beyond the river and tree, the point is not getting to me, sorry.

    • Venugopal silver member
      May 21
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      when eagle flies, the trail is not seen, unlike marks left after we trod on

  • Piccola gold member
    May 20
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    this is great; an invisable trail. The ahhhh of your haiku. Very good. best wishes in the contest.
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