no marks

float
leaves trail
invisible

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haiku

EAGLE HIAKU by Swan song. 1000 points, ended May 31, 2008, 19 entries
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Swan song
May 23, 2008
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This is a short short haiku Very interesting indeed
crimsondew
May 23, 2008
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Beautiful senryu...
all the best!
Sandal
May 21, 2008

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This one is a little too bare for my taste, I am not seeing the image clearly. Beyond the river and tree, the point is not getting to me, sorry.
- Venugopal
  May 21, 2008
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  when eagle flies, the trail is not seen, unlike marks left after we trod on
piccola
May 20, 2008
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this is great; an invisable trail. The ahhhh of your haiku. Very good. best wishes in the contest.