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Power of a Smile

Majestic muscles align synergistically,
brilliant mist clears blocks as
ailments cease havoc.

Outer persona projects giddiness
and well-to-do welcomes.

Self confidence shines,
domestic aliens see eye-to-eye[ear-to-ear]
and kindred, revel in relation.


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Impact life one Soul at a time ...

Ingest their reciprocity but disregard
the sneers, for today by chance,
their face may uplift when hidden;
stir an infectious smile which
may overcome Their chaos,

because of your generosity.

Author notes

Smiles heal oneself as well as others.

solo wisp

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  • PerfectImperfection
    August 19, 2008

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    Smile, kill them with kindness, even your enemies lol. A well penned piece about putting a fresh face forward in hope of a brighter day. This goes well with the thought of what you send out comes back to you. Nicely done. Thank you for your entry!


  • Desire gold member
    May 20, 2008

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    Oh My Word!!


    This is one Magnificent piece You have penned with a message that touches deep~
    reaches into the core of the conscious but also so True in which I witnessed first hand
    What a Difference it so makes- Therapeutic healing qualities~
    It takes more energy to frown, be miserable then it does to smile and embrace Happiness
    Loved this one my Friend!!
    I remember being told...imagine a person feeling Your smile through the phone, also through Your words too
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Lovewaits
    May 19, 2008

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    I really enjoyed reading this piece, it actually made me smile, as I'm at work and having a ruff morning. So thank you for putting a smile on my face. :


  • Naridill gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    Beautiful tone. Simply stunning.
    You marvel tones spoken in whisper..
    yet spoken clearly.


  • staticgrace
    May 19, 2008
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    :)

    Thank you for your poem


  • melphleg gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    What a way to say a smile makes another person's day. I especially like the bridge line between the stanza. Once soul at a time, that's how we change the world.


  • simphiwe
    May 19, 2008

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    its funny how something as simple as kindness can change a lot and bring the brightest light to any kind of darkness. smiles can heal a broken heart and leave hope in any kind of situation...


  • nilav
    May 19, 2008

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    yes,smile heals filling us with positive energy and filling others also with positive energy which is very essential in life...


  • Triami Arack
    May 19, 2008

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    How true, how true. I can really feel the power of the poem deep inside, and it takes a lot to hit me that deep! Good job poet, congrats and keep up the good work, I look forward to more reads from you!


  • Olivias Violin
    May 19, 2008
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    "Impact life one Soul at a time ..." - Great message!


  • nahomie
    May 19, 2008

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    When I read your poem for the first time I had no idea what the hell this child was trying to say. Then I thought about the title 'power of a smile'...well actually the word 'smile' came to me and I thought..THE POWER OF A SMILE... and it all made sense. nicely written.. although I could do without words like...synergistically...but then again what do I know...but overall this poem was simply...lovely.


  • ElectricStarrySkies
    May 19, 2008

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    At a first read this poem seems confused and it is difficult to see the point and to understand it. However, once i read it through again it became really clear yet still a little enigmatic. I think this is a really good write and you should keep up the good work coz it's AMAZING!!! I love it!!!


  • trekkergirl
    May 19, 2008

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    your poem power of a smile

    This was a very interesting read. I like the way you told first how a smile begins then goes to the way it affects people. Good job.


  • hks
    May 19, 2008

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    this is nice, simple and says altt its realy hopeful and it is actually kind of inspirational, which is cool..

    i like this alot,

    anyways

    much love.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    Aww that is just wonderful!!! Brilliantly worded.. and completely true! A smile is infectious and can help not only the person receiving it but ourselves...


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