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Let I be Aye and You be Hue

So who will I take on: the you or the hue?
which one will then follow: the hue ... or the you?
and who will you answer to: I or ... the Aye?
so let us not wonder -- let's give it a try!

Author notes

Option 2: I am the kind of girl who accepts differences ... but who can only relate to the true hue!
Myrataal
Inspired by Allan

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  • Rovingone gold member
    June 3, 2008

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    And, let you yay be yay and your nay be nay! Even if it's neigh. Just charming, you have a different way of looking at things.


  • Sherry gold member
    May 20, 2008

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    Myra, I have missed your poetry its always had and still does a voice of its own

    like no other course we all have a voice within us right sometimes it just isn't heard.

    I hear your voice though through your heart and its never a disappointment. I have

    missed you and I am sorry I haven't been around as much to read your poems.

    I wanted to see if I still could reflect in the mind I used to with them. Glad that hasn't

    gone away too with my musing to write. (LOL) Love the hair cut and color red huh?

    This reflects how you have a open heart to really just get to know the person both

    good and not good and hopefully the reward or hue is love in the end for each person.

    Love and miss you, Me 


  • Stormy Sky
    May 19, 2008

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    i love it. i love how you took it and put a totally different spin on it than everyone else in the contest. very nice and i applaud you for standing out.

    Good write and good luck

    ~stormy


  • PerVirtuous
    May 19, 2008

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    Hue always seem to no
    just where the faultlines lye
    and either friend of faux
    is blessed as you walk bye


  • Emerald13
    May 19, 2008

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    i can see from reading some of yours, your mind runs through a riot of colour (and hue) ... i know you probably dont dream in black in white ... ... wishing you much joy, daily >>> Gina


  • Sandal
    May 19, 2008

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    Sweet

    I like your play with words, and the adventurous attitude of bright colours and saying yes to try things. We gain when we are willing to venture. Good luck!

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