Living a life,
in my surreal,
to bridge destinations
within you
non existent, invisible
in audience of hypocrites
with dedication.
Author notes
Prompt: "Meet on the bridge of dreams"
A contest entry
- pif quickie; 10 entries; 20 words; 1hr by Grey Mouser.
900 points, ended May 19, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Lovely write - liked the background for this one too. Congrats on taking gold - now you are holding your contest in the PIF part.



