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Caught Off Guard

In a flash
a hand falls down to pick up the trash
and the look of flex
extends to the eyelash
and gets worn in by cleaners

then slaved this sight
situates all its glory in a game of chinese whispers

mercy mercy

each blink passed on
loitering dirt
polluting the places

the picking of trash
the trash
the littering
the litterati

mercy, merely seen

alot can happen in a quick blink

sneaky mercy, merely see

before you know it
ships sinked,
dead end pollutions
crying samaritans

awfulfilled streets in misery
trash frilled a full to the brim within the blink
that didn't even cause a stir to the eyebrow and it's guard

mercy mercy

Author notes

sorryyy this poem needs alot of word

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  • Tigris
    June 8, 2008

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    I don't what it is about this poem, but it has a very amiable quality. I really love the first stanza. Thank you for your entry.