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Dance of the Hours

ponchielli must have known
something
about the composition
of creature and creation

whilst time is gliding
over seasons
heart's passion
sounds its sharp staccato

the Dance turns timeless
turns da capo

myra

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Written February 17th, 2002

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  • May 18, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    i'm with gecko on this one me know not him, though the name rings bells :) maybe those bells are in time to poem :)

  • aiwaz
    February 17, 2002
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    incredible music


  • gecko
    February 17, 2002
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    I must admit that I know little of thid person ponchielli
    perhaps you can enlighten me?
    enjoyed this read Myra


  • myrataal silver member
    February 17, 2002
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    I appreciate your words, dear Student.


  • Nam
    February 17, 2002
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    language is all but deserved.
    Edited on Jun 07, 12:08 because ''.


  • Nam
    February 17, 2002
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    excellence upon my eyes read, and my fingers dance gleefully.


    Edited on Jun 07, 12:01 because ''.

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