You bring me to a place so rare, no other can do the same
deep inside, butterflies at the sound of your name
I loved the feel of your embrace, after your shower, the smell
without your kiss, your support and smile, my life is a living hell.
When I'm not with you I'm vulnerable to life's pathetic ways
they slander my name and bring me down, hurt by what the world says
You gave me life, you gave me breath, a reason to keep on living
my love not returned, cruel words were said, trying to make me stop believing
that there was a time and a place for us, that we could go back in time
when there was love, friendship trust, back when you were still mine.
You always knew how to make me laugh, you could always make me smile.
the times that I had with you were always worth my while.
Just give me one more day to show you how I feel about your memory
and maybe you will see the light, maybe you will still love me
Don't you realize that no one will ever love you the way I do?
I will stand by your side until its done, forever through and through.
A contest entry
- the days I spent with you..... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended May 19, 2008, 7 entries
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Ah..there is a strong point of view in the words..and that is very honestly stated..well done..and thanks for your entry...

