My cerulean eyes see past your pain
and breaks into you buried soul.
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I am seeking deep with feelings
so you may not feel so alone.
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You must dream with a full trust
of being able to do what you wish.
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Take my hand and feel my beating heart,
yet blindly seek your own firm start.
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I give you hope, dreams and love
because you are worth saving....
Author notes
10 Lines
prompt is "For the broken heart from collapsed dreams"
In a list
A contest entry
- quickie by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended May 19, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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Beautiful take on the prompt. Love the first line, great start to an amazing poem. Beautiful picture as well.
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This is such a great piece!
All the best to you in this contest.
Keep it up and thanks a lot for
sharing it here!
Jeremy0826 -
Woot.. can't wait to read
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