I'm the type of woman to wow you when having a whale of a time
In a while I'd ask 'would you be mine'
but then keeping in mind
I'm the wild one
The W i l d C a r d
and within I have not much of a nice greeting
my message gives out the impression
'I'm into no strings, say you want more and I'll be running a mile'
I'm the cinderella in a woman; must go with no reason
I'm the cindy doll, not quite the average barbie, never having her Ken
Author notes
OPT 2
A contest entry
- I'm the kind of girl/boy who.....(easy, creative, fun) by Stormy Sky.
400 points, ended June 3, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
GIVE ME YOUR TREASONS
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I'm the cindy doll, not quite the average barbie, never having her Ken
definately my favorite stanza. i love the imagery i get from this poem. what i love most, though, is that you stand out in your personality. True i only connect a bit, that is not the point of this contest and i like that you stand out. the world needs more people like that.
don't fret about the 11 lines thing, it's just the break you put in.
good write and good luck
~stormy
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why is it saying 11 lines??????
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