Summer Dreams
Soft glow of the moonlight surrounds us,
Underneath the old oak tree.
Mesmerized and captivated from your tender touches,
My love, you are a dream!
Endless summer nights together,
Romance lingers within the air,
Dewdrops fall upon us,
Reminding us that tomorrow is here.
Engulfed by loves sweet temptation,
Avowing our every need,
Magically the passion of our love is surrendered,
So tender and beautifully!
A contest entry
- ~ Summer Dreams ~ (Acrostic) by Frozentearz.
525 points, ended May 22, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great atmosphere in this!I could feel it and see it!It's lovely!
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Thank you!
Thank you for your comment! It makes my day to log in ever once in awhile and see a comment on something I have written altho i haven't been writing much lately~thanks again!
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This was a delight to read,
full of some wonderful thoughts.
Nice to see you penning, Hope it draws out more.
miss seeing you around,
Love and Light
Tearz
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Thanks Shey! :)
Thanks for reading and commenting on this! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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It is a lovely acrostic but usally they are aligned to the left so that it is easy to see the words they form. Thanks for entering and best wishes.
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Thanks for reminding me about that!
It's been a lonnnnng while since I have written pretty much anything and I knew something didn't look right so thank you for the suggestion as now it at least "looks" better! Thanks for the contest as it got my imaginary mind wandering and working!! lol~
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