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Master Of Darkness

A melody sung for Luna
Awakens me from glorious slumber
Celestial items dance in the Heaven's
silhouetted trees sway in nights mist
Mysterious land ruled by Varg

Tremble at his powerful voice

Become chilled as powerful teeth catch Luna's light

Am I but a guest in this land?

Or am I but substance for the nocturnal beast?

His song rings out powerful slicing through the silence

Celestial bodies dance and frolic

A conductor and his symphony

I am but a guest to his masquerade in the glorious night

I sway to the tune

Dance freely in the cool grasses on my bare feet

Light of Luna shining upon us

Music flows and stars join my dance

This is the night

The night of dance, the night of the master

Author notes

Inspired by the picture "The Lone Wolf" found at http://www.coolchaser.com/themes/keywords/lone+officer

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  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 1, 2008
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    Good write and imagery. Best to you.


  • fantasysmurf
    September 10, 2008

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    Good descriptions

    Thnk you for your entry poet. I enjoyed the soliloquy narration of your poem. The alliteration of this peice is well founded. Thank you for your unique entry, poet


  • crazymomma
    August 10, 2008

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    Very vivid and amazing imagery in this poem. I enjoyed the repetition of "but a guest". Nicely done. Thanks for entering and good luck.


  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    July 29, 2008
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    This is a really cool poem. I loved the imagery you put into this piece. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.

  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    June 24, 2008

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    I really like this poem. I love the imagery you put into it. Felt like I was reading a story I could not put down. I enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.


  • Riftkin gold member
    May 24, 2008

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    This is great and I like where you took it.
    A story telling poem, I like them myself.
    To dance in the light of Luna is wonderful.

    Riftkin

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