im sorry means nothing without meaning
promises aren’t meant without an action
when I said I am sorry I meant it with all my heart
I know the promises that I had said meant nothing because I need put them into action
I told you I would change and I didn’t
I know my anger can get the better of me
its my fault
I am not sorry obvious because I would have changed
I will tell you I am sorry when you see that my anger has subsided
then I will be truly sorry
I wont promise you a thing until I know I have showed improvement
then I will promise you I will not go back to those ways
Please tell me what you think
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This sounds familiar......
I do believe Miss Thorn that I've theorised what you've said here before to you.....Gosh you only remember them MONTHS after the event! lols
Its a different style than what I'm used to but it still works out well. I liked the almost sandwich effect of what was said before and after "It's my fault" (Well, its not your fault but its easier to say than the actual reason) And as well as the words and meaning of a piece of writing, I like the way the shape of the block of text is. Good luck Cherry Blossom in sorting out this challenge xxxx
(P.S Next time on Allpoetry: Szaphyre takes something else I've thought about before and applies it to a problem!! Grr CREDIT ME OR SOMETHING!! =^.^= lols )
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