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Time

Time is a word
Time can't be heard
Time is a lock
Where is the key
Time isn't about a clock
Time is when you found me

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Inspired by an ex.

A contest entry

What do you think? Give me an honest opinion please.

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  • No More Lies
    May 20, 2008

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    Wow, very deep
    You clearly put alot of heart an soul into this one
    Hope you win the contest
    If not, we go Viking on them


    • Shadow Stalker
      May 20, 2008
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      Thank you

      Its something I wrote in school if I remember correctly. But unfortunately I didn't win... Oh well I guess I can always try again.

      ~Night Mistress~


  • james119
    May 19, 2008

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    It seems to me this is a wistful reflection. If one could only find the key to go back in time to start over at that pivotal moment. The changes one would make... wouldn't we all like that opportunity~
    Thanks for your entry.