'Twixt the Rowan trees I lie
Thoughts are flowing freely by
Upon the Earth, green grasses grow
A testament to natures know
These ancient trees, tall and proud
Kings of Earth, murmur loud
By the wind that blows between them
Rustles at their hem
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Your lovely poem evokes the
peaceful feeling of lying on the grass looking up into trees watching and listening to nature at work with deep appreciation. You have a smooth rhyme flow with well chosen images. The title is well chosen also.
For me your message would be a bit clearer if you put a period at the end of L6 then began L7 with Wind that blows...Outstanding effort!
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Hmmm... this is interesting ^^
I like the rhyme pattern, it doesn't feel forced so it flows nicely
It also creates an interesting image
I like it!!
Noir xx
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