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Shades of Red






I have a desire for shades of red
like the red that is upon your lips
that are as plump as cherries in Spring.

Have I told you they are beautiful
and that when I see your face
I envision soft petals of a rose.

There is no other woman
that I've wanted to kiss
as much as you.

When I dream of you
I dream of shades of red
for it is the color of love.

That is what I feel for you
and I am hungry for your red lips
to come and touch mine.






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  • Amera gold member
    May 20

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    You devil you! You know just the right things to say to push a girl's buttons.

    Love,
    Amera


  • meic
    May 20

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    A nice piece of classically romantic poetry. I love the first stanza and the body of the poem flows nicely. I think the last stanza is not quite as strong as the rest, and you may want to look at it again.

  • BecomingDawn silver member
    May 19
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    Lovely

    Nice!


  • 2lullabyhaven
    May 18

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    ah, this speaks volumes of brightly lit love tones; I love it lol


  • azlyn gold member
    May 18

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    Whoa...now that makes a girl need a kiss!!! Very deeply sensual and romantic! Sigh...delicious!

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