Darkness please surround me
Moon save me
Stars comfort me
Help me forget him
His face mocks me
His indiffreance burns me
Wasn't it only yesterday
That we stared up at this sky
In love and alive?
Now lonewolf I cry
Nightmare in the moon light
Author notes
I just left what I hoped would be the love of my life I feel abonded
A contest entry
- Lost and Alone by Riftkin.
475 points, ended May 24, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
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800 points, ended June 24, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
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What did you think
Comments
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I really felt identified with this poem. It's very good. Many lonewolves in the moon light.....so true
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interesting
I wish it was longer and had more to it, ie deeper feeling. It's good nevertheless and I like it!
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This is an awesome poem. Man, this brought back memories of my ex Greg. One minute we love each other. The next I find out about his past and want nothing to do with him. Anyways, I enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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I am first off, going to say how sad I am for how things are for you.
This was a good poem, you took your sadness
and blended it with the picture.
Riftkin
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