Through the midst an eerie sound
streams of carcasses on the ground.
Howling winds or wolves, who knows,
running so fast, the adrenaline flows.
Creepy night, no where to hide,
uncomfortable feeling is growing inside.
Clouds exploded, the moon split open wide,
blood drizzled to earth, coating the outside.
Engulfed by the mist, darkness swallowed you whole,
mesmerized by sparkling stars, evil soothed the soul.
Heavy rustling of the grass and trees,
fear has settled; now a prisoner of the evening breeze.
I closed my eyes, wishing away,
that I would find solace, but there’s no leeway
Squinting harder, there is not a trace,
of finding the pathway, out of this horrid place!
Author notes
Pic prompt
Yes well , I got caught up in the pic lol. went all south with it. Oh well. Will redo and make a happier piece if i must. ( I blame the meds lol)
A contest entry
- Lost and Alone by Riftkin.
475 points, ended May 24, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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I love the rhyme and flow with this one.
the story unfolds so perfectly. Thank you
for taking the time to write for this.
Riftkin
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Love ya Victorious!
You pen so indepth, shine on!
-Timothy
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Wonderfully written and presented sweetheart. Sometimes the light at the end of the tunnel is too dim to see. It is then that we blindly trust our God that things will be alright. Faith + Trust = Hope. Love you Tory...Scott
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