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Shatter Glass

How do I go one with out
your sweet lips

No warm hugs that
surround me with love

My soul is a wet
noodle limp dry out

Strange world we live in
taking small things for granted

Not thinking outside our
world of shatter glass

Now broken no longer
shiny left like junk

Now I do the meaningless
stuff to get by today

True love is a gift
to be cherished to grow
in to a wonderful garden

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First weekend alone

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  • tawk gold member
    May 21, 2008

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    My Heart Is Breaking For You!

    Oh my dear sweet sister! I love you so much Please call if you need me, I will try to call you this weekend or earlier if you want just let me know. Remember your love will always be with you just in another form Love and hugs Theresa


  • Star Shine
    May 19, 2008

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    So sad, but written with a strong spirit. SO many seeds of truth, "now I do the meaningless stuff to get by today..." So well-written, I am so sorry for your pain.


  • Lady Altheia
    May 19, 2008

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    Hoodwinked

    I spend many weekends alone. It is always the hardest the first time. It is slow to get better. Keep having faith.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    Oh this is so sad! Bless your heart. Your message is so true. We all need to cherish and appreciate those we love, and hold them close. Very emotional write.


  • StarEyes
    May 19, 2008
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    Brenda,

    This is breaking my heart honey... I really wish I could help you more than I am doing... You are the sweetest woman I know...

    What a beautiful job you did on this one, even though it is breaking my heart honey...

    You know where I am if you want to talk...

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    May 19, 2008

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    sad~

    This is written beautifully but so sad sis
    I hope this is only a poem and not real
    I wish for you a wonderful garden that flourishes and blooms with beauty beyond grandeur...
    Love n hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    May 18, 2008

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    You sound terribly sad and lonely, honey. I am so sorry you're going through all this pain.

    This poem radiates pain and sorrow. I agree wholeheartedly with your final stanza.

    I wish I could give you a real .

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