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[ mysterious sky ]

mysterious sky
beckoning the unwary
point of no return

A contest entry

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  • Piccola gold member
    May 20

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    this made me think...we recently had a bird show in town at our poppy festival. They had eagles and hawks and of course several types of owls...most are predatory and for the prey; they never return...nice haiku best wishes in the contest.

  • Kelli Marie
    May 19

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    A very nicely crafted haiku. I like the 'mysterious sky' I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck.
    Kelli