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Hanging onto any hope of having you.

Hanging onto any hope of having you.
Not letting go of the memory of you, in hopes that someday I'll see your beautiful face once more.
Holding onto the glory of you and inbrace every moment that we have ever shared.
One day I will be loving you and you will be loving me again.
Every day that passes I know It's only one more day I want have to wait any longer for you.
I'll I have to do is wait for his mistake.
Then I'll come in a win you back.
Till the I'll be hanging onto any hope of having you.

Author notes

Here this is for the wonderful.

The loving

The best thing that was in my life and the one that took herself out of my life.

 

Amanda!

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  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    May 31

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    Thanks a lot for taking the time to
    write for this contest. However,
    I did state in the contest rules that
    your poem should be at least 20 lines
    long. Please review and edit your work
    if you want to remain in this contest.
    When you are through please do not message
    me. Simply type in the word "Revised" in
    your title and that will alert me. Thanks
    again and good luck to you here!




    Jeremy0826

  • kareneisenlord gold member
    May 19

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    This is very sad, yet hopeful. It must really hurt, as your words so exquisitely portray. So full of regrets yet hanging on to being reunited with your loved one again. This part stood out;
    "I'll I have to do is wait for his mistake.
    Then I'll come in a win you back.
    Till then I'll be hanging onto any hope of having you."

    I think you meant that to be "All I have to do is wait for his mistake. Then I'll come back and win you back"? Just a few little typos there.

    Best of luck in the contest and a warm welcome to our happy family group! Oh, it looks like you forgot to mention the option number that you chose.

    Thank you for sharing this lovely, heartfelt poem! One's first true love in life can be so intense, and we feel we will never recover from their loss. There is a life again after this, but I wish you well in reuniting again.

  • tawk gold member
    May 19

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    Wow such a sad and heartfelt write. I could feel all the love you have for this person. Amazing emotion. Good luck in the contest, thanks for sharing Theresa