Sneaking away from the playground
To our spot no one ever found
Eight years old dancing under the tree
You gave me a ring-pop and said marry me
Barefoot in the sand
Dancing hand in hand
Teenagers deep in love
Swirling with the stars above
We exchanged vows and rings
As we married in the spring
We danced again that night
With our eyes shining bright
Now we're old with white hair
But you wont find us in a rockin' chair
We're still goin' strong
Dancing to our love song
Any advice?
Comments
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This is very nice work Mindie! I like how you show love in every generation of life so to speak. A true vision of love that lasts forever! I like it alot!
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LOL! This is awesome Mindie!
Such a cute story of enduring love.
I love the ring pop proposal in this.
Very creative and lovely as always!
Well done and keep it up!
Jeremy0826
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Wonderful
Aww, this was so romantic. Love enduring forever. Very sweet and touching. Thank you for sharing.
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