whilst parting the clouds
the eagle finds his purpose
lifting in the wind
Author notes
Haiku
5-7-5
traditional
A contest entry
- EAGLE HIAKU by Swan song.
1000 points, ended May 31, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very good this one is truly excellent Well done and good luck
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nice!
beautiful and simple. KUDOS!
i am point poor so i can only give 3
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An amazing haiku..."parting"--great verb use here. I can really see the eagle. :]
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this paints a great picture of the awsome eagle. best wishes in the contest.
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it cannot help itself...uplift updraft...wings spread like sails--and the skies the limit
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Awesome, awesome haiku!! Beautifully written. You did a wonderful job with this. Great imagery. Good luck.
Kelli -
Stunning Haiku... I'm always impressed by people that can write them and create such vivid images in the mind with a few words
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The second and third lines are wonderful, mom. I know gambling is bad, but I have to bet nobody will write anything better than you!
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wow i wish i could write like this
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Beautiful haiku. I love your second line. Good luck in the contest.
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