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A Feeling Shared.

I feel your sorrow,
Your sadness and pain,
It has a place,
It has a name.

I know of this ache,
This tragic time,
When you actually feel,
As if you have died.

Inside, perhaps it is,
That we just can’t see,
How the end of a life,
Can be something happy.

Rejoice and declare,
Some great grand feat,
Because just right now,
I’m feeling hurt and angry.

I’m feeling kinda like,
This whole things a sham,
That they want for something,
You no longer can

Leaving you to be a shell,
An empty silent case.
Holding in the beauty,
That no longer belongs to this place.

The road to heaven,
From earth and to hell,
Are all the same path,
As far as I can tell.

And though suffering,
It is natural with death,
But only because,
We haven’t experienced it yet.

I hope so any way,
Not just for me, but you,
And the one that you are missing,
So as to write as you do…

Author notes

Just what I felt when reading a brother's words about the loss of his sister. I have lost loved ones and know the ache.

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  • Unsigned gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    It is so good to see you writing again.

    A beautiful thought penned wonderfully...

    Simon