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Tanka




One by one we make
designs with abandoned shells
making this moment
one that we will remember
with crude letters "I love you."




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  • Ithica silver member
    May 21
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    A sweet design of love's simplicity in a complicated world!!! Nice!!!


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    May 19
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    Great tanka! Thought "designs with abandoned shells" outstanding!


  • Nature Song silver member
    May 18

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    Crude letters that nasty four letter word...Love. We come into the world not knowing what it means till we grow old and wise. Sometimes always too late.

    Lovely poem.

    ~Sie