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Collapsing Rainbows

The
colors
together
tend to mingle
and turn an ugly
shade of burnt sienna.
Individually  they  were
beautiful shades that existed
to bring joy to anyone who saw,
but the structure of the rainbow collapsed.

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  • artis gold member
    August 24

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    Much like an angry mob, of many colors, it all turns to ugliness when there is a meltdown,

    a blur of hate unleashed, and red becomes predominant in the mud beneath their feet, just what i saw in your poem...one of those nights, and you too are amazing my dear Sammy~~Artis

  • wow, sammy. I would love to know what inspired this. it could mean a lot of different things. it seems to me like a simple way of explaining something more complicated. or am i over analyzing? anyway, I love it, and its great to see something new from you! i always enjoy your work! *hugs*