Love is like pain
Like the Rain
Hurtful rude mean
Never what it seams
Like the blood on my wrist
Got me in a twist
You dont love me
I let it be
Its all the same
In love which is a game
A contest entry
- No rules, Just excellence by PonyPride.
1100 points, ended June 4, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 9 of 9
-
..bwahaha.
A great laugh 
-
i LyK dIs PoEm AlOt!!i ThInK lUv N hAtE r Da SaMe ThInG!!
-
love it
this is a really nice poem!! -
i love it
i feel the emotion
i know how it is.....
-
wow
dat is so tru
-
nice write.I liked it..its sad but its so true "love is pain"..i have the tatted on my arm.But anyways..like i said it was a good write...(BTW...Thanks for commenting on my poem)
-
okay I think you have the right idea here and I like it so far. But I would really like if you added grammer so that I would kno exactly how to read it. Also I am confused with "Hurtful rude mean" and I am not sure what It means. If you would like to edit this and message me when you want me to rejudge it that would be great because I really think that this could be something.
-
-
wut the hells wrong with it alredy i dont see anithing that needs work!! who do u think u r to tell me how to write!?
-
-
firstly, I explained what I did'nt like already but I thought it was good. Also, if you read my contest info I said that I would be commenting with honesty. Please take no offense, I was just judging and commenting, which is what I am supposed to do
-
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 9 of 9
