Running like the wind along this
Indescribable sandy shoreline
Summer sun glistens over the
Incredibly beautiful abyss
New life floods through me as I
Grow immensely from this crowded city beach.
There's hope in the air
It's rising up inside of me just like that
Deep, deep ocean and its
Ever rising tide.
Author notes
I don't usually do acrostics, but for a contest I decided to do one anyway. How you like it.
A contest entry
- ~ Summer Dreams ~ (Acrostic) by Frozentearz.
525 points, ended May 22, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think!!!
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I liked it a lot,
Glad to see you join us, this Acrostic suits you
Thanks for sharing,
Warm thoughts.
frozentearz -
Theres hope rising inside of me just like the ever rising tide... Lovely acrostic. Thanks for entering and best wishes.
Frogz~ -
I adore it. I actually did a piece kinda like this. Its called....uhhh totally forgot for the moment. Guess I'll tell ya later. I like this. It has good word choice. I love it.
Shannon
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i really like your word choise for this acrostic it has a wonderful flow and says so much about the summer time, good luck in the contest and keep up the great writing -Amy
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Usually acrostics seem weird and forced. This doesn't at all! I almost didn't realize it was an acrositc and thought it was a regular poem, that shows how well it flows! Great job and good luck in the contest.
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