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Only Dreams

Hearts are bridged together
with papier-mâché dreams.

Making plans that evaporate
the fog clouds our thinking
love has it victory…

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prompt; "Meet on the bridge of dreams"

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20 words

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    May 26, 2008

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    Moves Me!

    Only true love endures! You captured the essence of that so well in a few words. This penetrates the heart & leaves quite an impression. Well done poet!